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#1 investpro

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Posted 27 April 2020 - 02:25 AM

WE ARE SUPER EXCITED

about the launch of our new

LINK ROTATOR and DOWNLINE BUILDER!

You can be one of the first to be notified when we go live on

May 15, 2020

and one of the first to lock in your spot in our 3 X 5 matrix! 

Please follow the link below to get details on this amazing opportunity.

BONUS $50.00 STOCK SHARE

that you can claim on launch day! See details at the site.

https://bit.ly/2S7Eo6y

Thank You.


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#2 Laura Butter

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Posted 30 April 2020 - 06:07 AM

Hello, 

 
I have looked at your site. As requested by you, I would like to give a small bit of advice concerning your site. Why just a small bit and not some comprehensive feedback? Well, because I am a total newbie to affiliate marketing and I did not even know what you were advertising, to be honest - I had to google it first. :-)
 
 
Having said that, I hope that my feedback can still be helpful. I stumbled upon the phrase "We are super excited." Yes, of course you are! I can understand that very well. However - and now the tough bit is coming, please forgive me for being so blunt: Who cares about the fact that you are super excited? Does it bring me (as a potential client) any advantages? My answer: No, it does not. After all, virtually every person in the world of affiliate marketing will scan your message,site or advertisement with the thought in mind: "What can I get from it?"
Therefore, I would suggest you change that initial phrase to something more appealing, something that will immediately hook people by telling them the BIGGEST ADVANTAGE you are offering to them. This is some honest (yet most likely nit-picking) advice from a person who has worked as a copywriter in a marketing agency for three years (I am not an English native). 
 
I hope you will find it helpful and wish you all the best for your business. 
 
Regards, 
Laura

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#3 Donnie Ellis

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Posted 05 May 2020 - 04:17 AM

From what I can see it looks like you are offering a type of leads program.  Is this a mailer or traffic exchange you are inviting people to join.  Can you be more specific on that?

 

Donnie Ellis

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#4 Peggy Hough

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Posted 11 May 2020 - 11:31 AM

More specifics would be helpful.


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#5 Glen Palo

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Posted 12 May 2020 - 07:21 AM

My initial response is, why another downline builder? I have been there and done that as have so many of us marketer types. So...

 

what makes yours different?

 

It is not clear what's in it for me.


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#6 investpro

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Posted 12 May 2020 - 01:35 PM

From what I can see it looks like you are offering a type of leads program.  Is this a mailer or traffic exchange you are inviting people to join.  Can you be more specific on that?

 

Donnie Ellis

TrafficTips4u.com

Hi Donnie,

Yes it is a lead generation system that uses a Link Rotator to send leads to our downline's referral pages for the Touchstone Success Network MLM program. We advertise the page you accessed, which has a link to the Rotator. When clicked, the next-in-line TSN member's referral page is presented to the visitor. Everyone receives an equal share of leads from our advertising via email, SMS, and Internet ads.


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#7 investpro

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Posted 12 May 2020 - 01:37 PM

My initial response is, why another downline builder? I have been there and done that as have so many of us marketer types. So...

 

what makes yours different?

 

It is not clear what's in it for me.

Hi Glen,

Yes it is a lead generation system that uses a Link Rotator to send leads to our downline's referral pages for the Touchstone Success Network MLM program. We advertise the page you accessed, which has a link to the Rotator. When clicked, the next-in-line TSN member's referral page is presented to the visitor. Everyone receives an equal share of leads from our advertising via email, SMS, and Internet ads.


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