Laura Butter

Hello, I have looked at your site. As requested by you, I would like to give a small bit of advice concerning your site. Why just a small bit and not some comprehensive feedback? Well, because I am a total newbie to affiliate marketing and I did not even know what you were advertising, to be honest - I had to google it first. :-) Having said that, I hope that my feedback can still be helpful. I stumbled upon the phrase "We are super excited." Yes, of course you are! I can understand that very well. However - and now the tough bit is coming, please forgive me for being so blunt: Who cares about the fact that you are super excited? Does it bring me (as a potential client) any advantages? My answer: No, it does not. After all, virtually every person in the world of affiliate marketing will scan your message,site or advertisement with the thought in mind: "What can I get from it?"Therefore, I would suggest you change that initial phrase to something more appealing, something that will immediately hook people by telling them the BIGGEST ADVANTAGE you are offering to them. This is some honest (yet most likely nit-picking) advice from a person who has worked as a copywriter in a marketing agency for three years (I am not an English native). I hope you will find it helpful and wish you all the best for your business. Regards, Laura